Let me help you compare the translation with the original Spanish text:
Original Spanish:
"La educación ambiental es fundamental para crear conciencia sobre los desafíos ecológicos actuales. Los jóvenes son agentes de cambio poderosos que pueden inspirar transformaciones significativas en sus comunidades. Mediante programas escolares, proyectos de reciclaje y campañas de conservación, los estudiantes aprenden a valorar los ecosistemas y desarrollan habilidades para proteger el medio ambiente. Su compromiso puede marcar la diferencia en la lucha contra el cambio climático y la preservación de la biodiversidad global."
Your Translation:
"The environmental education is fundamental to create understanding of the actual ecological challenges. The youth are the change agents who would be able to make significant transformations in their communities. Through school programmes, recycling projects and forest conservation, the students learn a lot about the ecosystems and develop habits to protect the environment. They comprehend to understand the difference in the struggle of climate change and the preservation of the global biodiversity."
Corrections/Observations:
- "environmental education" → should be "environmental education is"
- "create understanding" → more accurately "create awareness"
- "who would be able" → simplified to "who can"
- "forest conservation" → original says just "conservation campaigns"
- "learn a lot about" → more precisely "learn to value"
- "develop habits" → more accurately "develop skills"
- "They comprehend to understand" → redundant
- Slight deviation from original meaning in the last sentence
A more precise translation would be:
"Environmental education is fundamental to create awareness about current ecological challenges. Young people are powerful change agents who can inspire significant transformations in their communities. Through school programs, recycling projects, and conservation campaigns, students learn to value ecosystems and develop skills to protect the environment. Their commitment can make a difference in the fight against climate change and the preservation of global biodiversity."
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